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The Trail

niece006 — Mon, 06 Oct 2008 15:14:04 +0000

This was the scariest day of my young life; before I tell you here’s some advice never go on a creepy trail with your 2 crazy best friends!!

“Whooaaaa it’s to hot” Jasmine said as we waited at the park for our best friend Shawntae to arrive. Jasmine had braids and chubby checks she was pretty and a good best friend. Ten minutes later we saw a silver mini-van pulling up, so me and jasmine run towards it in excitement. Shawntae hops out of the car with surprise. “Bye mom” she says as her mom drove off. Shawntae has curly hair, but she got a relaxer and now its straight, she has braces that are green and, she is tall. Shawntae is a good best friend too. Ding-pop-snap-clap’ as the ice cream man came around. “Stop” we all shouted as the man pulls around the corner. We should walk on the trail Shawntae says as she orders her ice cream. “Okay” jasmine and me both say in excitement.

We entered in to t he silver gate. I had a bag of puffy hot cheetahs; we munched on them as we walked in. the trail was so dry; there was red ants everywhere and a horrific smell. I decide to leave a trail of flaming hot cheetahs has we walked. So just incase we get lost we will find our way back. Who is that Shawntae said as she peeked around the tree, she saw a man with a dirty face and, holes in his shoes, rotted teeth, and sunglasses He looks as if he hasn’t showered in weeks. The man had a vicious dog with him. The doing had sharp teeth and large eyes, and foam coming out of his mouth as we went by. The dog barked at us as we locked arms and shivered with fear. “Eeeeeewwwwwww it smells really bad”. Look it’s a dead skunk as we all ran back to the main trail with butterflies in our stomachs. A couple of minutes later we made it to the top of the trail, as we saw the man coming the same way following our exact moves. We ran down the trail hill, but stopped in a fearful way and decide to run down the rocky hill. The man watched us go our separate ways has soon as we got out of the gate we all sprinted home. We were sweating and have dirt all over our socks and shoes. Ahhhhhhhhh I am never going on another trail we all say.

This changed by making me a stronger person then what I am, but I also made me fearful of trails. Hopefully I learn not to go on another trail with out an adult. Hey don’t laugh, because it can happen to you!

Is Hunting Bad?

niece006 — Tue, 16 Sep 2008 15:06:31 +0000

Yes, i Think Hunting is bad because, it kills animals and i think people shouldn’tdo it to make fur coats, rugs, or cut of there heads && hang them on there walls or make them fight. For example whem people make dogs fight other dogs just to hurt them it thew same exact thing except your not making animals fight your just killing them for stuff that’s not important. Like warmth i could understand if you didn’t have enough money for warmth then you have a reason but people who don’t have reason should stop. Here’s another example like if humans killed humans I’m pretty sure we would stop in a quick second i don’t see why we cant stop doing that to animals, I’m not saying just to stop killing them I’m just saying lower it down. I know that we have to eat them && stuff but that’s different. I think its also makes the food chain lower for other animals to feed or eat them. I also think that we loose population on animals. So people who do it daily should do it less. So i Hope people think bout the animals and what people do to them. It should not be an everyday thing.